I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 19 and my teacher is Mr Harris.
Tuesday, November 1, 2011
Our Topic this term is Outta this World. Our class have been doing a Mnemonic to memorize the Order of the planets. Here is our presentation of our Mnemonic that Ocean and I have made. Hope you enjoy (:
I liked the presentation you've put together there. A lot of good information put in an interesting format :)
You might do well to look at your spelling and check for sense when you edit, the start was good but you seemed to trail off near the end otherwise a very nice read :)
Hey Reina,
ReplyDeleteI liked the presentation you've put together there. A lot of good information put in an interesting format :)
You might do well to look at your spelling and check for sense when you edit, the start was good but you seemed to trail off near the end otherwise a very nice read :)
Have fun and keep writing :)